Tuesday, 19 February 2019
Sensory language
The road was brown orange when we were driving on top of it then there was a fast and loud train zooming right past our car it was so fast that we could not see it on the tracks then we drove past something so fluffy it was a low as cloud on the ground and close we could touch it with our bare hands.So then we crabbed a piece and tasted it it tasted like a yummy juicy peach when we got home our lounge smelt like rotten egg so we looked around and we eventually found the egg and we put it inside the bin to get rid of.Then later that night we had lots of friends over and had a massive party with a jbl bluetooth boombox and had a pool party
When the geese are flying south and the sky is grey my dears close your eyes and lift you nose listen with your careful ears.
Feel the winter coming on hear it in the crackling tree’s note the crisping quivering wind sharply snapping at there crispy leaves.
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This is very imaginative and descriptive writing, Nathan. Well done! To improve, use Grammarly.com to check your work. There are some full stops missing. Looking forward to reading more of your work in the future, Nathan. Keep it up. Ka rawe :)
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