Social Studies essay

In social studies my class have been learning about different treaties then we had to create an essay about treaties and my treaty is here

The whalers tribe was once the biggest but now a lot of people in that tribe have died and that tribe is not the biggest anymore. My point matters because the whalers tribe was the most important tribe in history and they once had a lot of people and they all died in the wars and that tribe is the smallest. 

There were many whalers the whalers were from many countries like Australia, France, and America but the majority were from Britain so the whalers tribe was the biggest and they came from many countries all around the world and a lot of them died to different things happening.

The Maori tribe/people taught the missionaries different things like agriculture and Christianity the earliest of missionaries came to New Zealand in 1814. My point matters because the missionaries did not know very much about agriculture and Christianity so the Maori taught them how to look after their farms and other things like livestock. Maori were good at teaching things and the missionaries did not know things the missionaries had to be taught how to look after animals and their land by the Maori and now they have learned a lot of things so now they can look after farms and animals and other things like that.

Thousands of Maori dies in the musket wars and the muskets changed warfare when the wars began thousands of people fled there land to go somewhere safe thousands were enslaved or became refugees. War is very different now because back in the days they only had muskets but now they have new guns which are even more deadly like cannons and machine guns which fire bullets one after another very fast. My point matters because Maori were either killed, enslaved or became refugees and the muskets had changed war by a big difference because they were very powerful and deadly 

It was created to say that the American colonies were no longer part of the British colonies and that they would have their own countries

The declaration of independence was created to split countries and colonies apart from each other

My point matters because countries were once together and now they are separated  

My treaty is all about the declaration of independence and why it was created and what it has done to other countries and it is also about the muskets and the war between them and how it started and ended and what happened in the middle of wars.