Once upon a time It was a creepy and murky night.A little girl called Rose was getting water from the well in the middle of a spooky forest. All of a sudden the moon came down the moon was a monster she screamed and yelled and fell over and landed on the water well.Then the moon put his hand out and he helped the girl up again and then she looked down the creepy dark bucket the moon was in the bottom.then the girl walked away and when the back home to her parents and had dinner with her family.Then the moon smiled at the girl when she looked out the window.Then the girl went to bed next morning the girl got up and the money was still up and smiling at the girl.After breakfast she went to the well and got water for her house and the girl gave the bucket full of water and then she said Good by parents and she went to look for her friends and played with them till dark.Then the moon came back out and played with. Like tag and the moon was hard to get because he was invisible to tag so the girl got tied and said good by mister moon and went in for dinner again.Then the moon a identity fainted so the girl looked out the window and helped the moon
I like how you used the word creapy and spooky because its a great way to describe what happend. Next time you could improve on more puncation.
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